Pitch
(sorry it's a little corny... ok maybe a lot)
Reflection
- Many people on the last elevator pitch seemed to like my video, so this time around I wanted to follow the same format. I presented my product idea in the manner of making the viewer imagine what it would be like to use The Food Pack and how it would benefit them. One person mentioned that Publix has a recipe they hand out that are to easy to make, perhaps in a later video I can tie in the recipe cards to my product. I can have a potential partnership with Publix recipe cards.
What did I change?
- Since the feedback was positive last time around I decided to up my video by presenting the audience with a "sample" meal they could make with The Food Pack. I felt this would help my product standout.
I actually got a pretty good laugh at the end! Overall I think that it was a very good pitch! The only thing that I would complain about is that you were talking very slowly. I think your opener was great and you kept good eye contact! Overall I was entertained and impressed! Feel free to check out my pitch! http://dillondunn.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3-dillon-dunn.html
ReplyDeleteHey Bridget! I think you did a great job on your pitch! Similarly to Dillon, you also made me laugh at the end! You speak with a lot of confidence but just a little bit too slowly. Other than that, the pitch was great! If you want to check out my pitch, you can do so here: http://sabinaent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Bridget,
ReplyDeleteGreat post! You showed great enthusiasm in your pitch. You call it "corny" but your spirit in presenting is much better than a dull, monotone delivery.
I also find your product would be very beneficial for myself. As someone who went back to school, I find it hard sometimes to balance work, school, and trying to prepare a great meal for my family. Just as long as it costs less than the current companies who deliver the food to you, this should be a great product.
I didn't get a chance to re-do my elevator pitch, so here is my general class blog.
https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=8973609705860193196#allposts/src=dashboard