Elevator Pitch No. 2
My last elevator pitch went pretty well and people commented that they thought my product was a good idea. This time around I tried to shorten my pitch from 2 minutes to 1 minute. There really wasn't much that I needed to change based on feedback, rather I set a goal of shortening my speech and implementing more ways to involve my audience (asking a question, make them think).
Hi Bridget!
ReplyDeleteI liked how you started you elevator pitch with asking questions. It got me thinking about how often I buy meals and that it really is a problem I need fixing. I also really liked how you used hand gestures while your speaking because it made you seem more passionate about your pitch.
You can check out my elevator pitch here! I'd love any criticism you have. http://darby95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hello Bridget,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job at presenting your idea, it sounds like you put a lot of thought into eating healthier. The food pack sounds awesome and would work really well with things that didn't need to be refrigerated. I notice at Publix they have the "Simple Apron's Meals" and often give the recipe along with having all the items together. Publix also has the "Make your own pizza" refrigerator in the Bakery which includes refrigerated sauce, dough, and pepperonis. I know a lot of people would eat healthier if shopping was made a little easier, and this food pack sounds like a good fix. Good luck! I hope to see your food pack in stores soon! You can check out my pitch in the link below.
http://rogerstrobert.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
I enjoyed your post. I like how you opened up with questions to draw in those who you are speaking to, I think it is very important to include this in a speech where you only have a short amount of time to get someone intrigued. I also liked how you were able to shorten the amount of time it took you to deliver your pitch.
ReplyDeleteHi Bridget!
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job on your pitch! I liked that you asked questions in the beginning to involve your audience. I think that is a good way to get people thinking as you introduce your service. You also did a good job shortening your pitch. Good luck with this! If you would like to look at my pitch here is the link:
http://myent3003blog.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi! This is an awesome idea! Last year I lived in Beaty towers and it turns out I was the only one who was able to cook anything! My roommates were able too cook simple things but a lot of the times I would cook full meals and everyone would eat them! It was a bit stressful at times it'd be really cool if there was something out there that would help them cook and eat healthy! Here is my pitch if you're interested! http://anaksunamoon216.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
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